This story isn't complete yet but I would like to hear some opinions on the stuff that I already got 
:
In a misty night in Saschburg, the dark streets of the city are empty. No living soul is on the streets or is there...
The only thing on the streets is a lost dog howling through the night.
Sometimes it seems like the time stops until the gong of the bell. From the highest tower, the tower with the clock the bell is heard in any part if the cut, breaking the silence for a moment.
There are not many who dare walk the streets of this city. With the background of the city and the things that are told... The city of vampires, the birth place of the famose Dracula ruler of Romania. The city where dark creatures gather every night, raising from their graves to hunt the living.
Those who walk the streets at night tell from a feeling of being followed or watched from the shadows...Green, red , blue and white eyes are common sights in the shadows of the night.
Some think that in this city, somewhere at the gravyard in the mountain is a gate...a gate to hell. No one dared to search for it but there are stories about it.
The most famose tale is the tale of The Ripper. The one who dared first to explore the gates of hell. Its been told that he collects the creatures of darkness and brings them back to the hell gate, but he also takes some people with him when he feels like it.
I shall tell you the story of this creature...
Chapter I Death is normal
In a small village near the city a young boy was born. The boy was named Marin. The first born of a hard working family. The boy was fast growing and from his early age he helped his family. With 6 brothers and 3 sisters he had to help as much as he could to feed all of them. The years passed and the family was doing well. No one could have foresee the future events that followed. The day Marun turned eighteen, a small party was thrown to celebrate this event. His father told him about how he become a man now and had to do a lot more things to help the family. There were a few drinks involved an d the father got a bit drunk. They both went outside to cool down...The father sliped on the ice. While trying to grab on to something he unforcunetly missed the solid wall and door and grabbed the broom...
After he got up he was furiose because he felt down. He waved the broom in the air talking about how the weather sucked. Suddenly a sound was heard. The Broom had hit a window.
In this cold time that could mean death to the whole family. They had no other window to replace the broken one. What they had though was some kind of glue. With that they could be able to repair glue the peaces together or at least fix it so the inside of the house won't get too could. Both rushed now in the house and collected the broken peaces. Marins mother and his brothers and sisters got under a blanket and were watching the two collect and glue the peaces. After about an hour the window was somehow glued together. They covered the holes that where in the window with cloth if there weren't peaces to glue.
They were lucky that the sun was shining that day. Even though outside were two degrees the sun shined and kept the house inside warm.
At night through the village a red fog made its way through the streets. An very unusual sight that happens every year in the 6th of january. Some call it the devils robe, and rumor has it that every year at the 6th the gates of hell are at their weakest point and through that weak spot a tiny peace of the hell storm cloud gets out.
This turns everyone mad. The person touched by the fog enters in a blood crawling state, like a zombie, but for a limited time. No one ever tried to figure out what time it took for someone to get back in his normal state, but cases are there of people who killed their whole families and then killed them selfs.
:In a misty night in Saschburg, the dark streets of the city are empty. No living soul is on the streets or is there...
The only thing on the streets is a lost dog howling through the night.
Sometimes it seems like the time stops until the gong of the bell. From the highest tower, the tower with the clock the bell is heard in any part if the cut, breaking the silence for a moment.
There are not many who dare walk the streets of this city. With the background of the city and the things that are told... The city of vampires, the birth place of the famose Dracula ruler of Romania. The city where dark creatures gather every night, raising from their graves to hunt the living.
Those who walk the streets at night tell from a feeling of being followed or watched from the shadows...Green, red , blue and white eyes are common sights in the shadows of the night.
Some think that in this city, somewhere at the gravyard in the mountain is a gate...a gate to hell. No one dared to search for it but there are stories about it.
The most famose tale is the tale of The Ripper. The one who dared first to explore the gates of hell. Its been told that he collects the creatures of darkness and brings them back to the hell gate, but he also takes some people with him when he feels like it.
I shall tell you the story of this creature...
Chapter I Death is normal
In a small village near the city a young boy was born. The boy was named Marin. The first born of a hard working family. The boy was fast growing and from his early age he helped his family. With 6 brothers and 3 sisters he had to help as much as he could to feed all of them. The years passed and the family was doing well. No one could have foresee the future events that followed. The day Marun turned eighteen, a small party was thrown to celebrate this event. His father told him about how he become a man now and had to do a lot more things to help the family. There were a few drinks involved an d the father got a bit drunk. They both went outside to cool down...The father sliped on the ice. While trying to grab on to something he unforcunetly missed the solid wall and door and grabbed the broom...
After he got up he was furiose because he felt down. He waved the broom in the air talking about how the weather sucked. Suddenly a sound was heard. The Broom had hit a window.
In this cold time that could mean death to the whole family. They had no other window to replace the broken one. What they had though was some kind of glue. With that they could be able to repair glue the peaces together or at least fix it so the inside of the house won't get too could. Both rushed now in the house and collected the broken peaces. Marins mother and his brothers and sisters got under a blanket and were watching the two collect and glue the peaces. After about an hour the window was somehow glued together. They covered the holes that where in the window with cloth if there weren't peaces to glue.
They were lucky that the sun was shining that day. Even though outside were two degrees the sun shined and kept the house inside warm.
At night through the village a red fog made its way through the streets. An very unusual sight that happens every year in the 6th of january. Some call it the devils robe, and rumor has it that every year at the 6th the gates of hell are at their weakest point and through that weak spot a tiny peace of the hell storm cloud gets out.
This turns everyone mad. The person touched by the fog enters in a blood crawling state, like a zombie, but for a limited time. No one ever tried to figure out what time it took for someone to get back in his normal state, but cases are there of people who killed their whole families and then killed them selfs.
