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Very cute! And I agree with the message being really strong. Has anyone here heard of the band Vitamin L? They sing these kind of moral songs that are meant to teach lessons. That's what this reminds me of!

Read the first book. And then I didn't read anymore. I mean I am a big fan of literary fiction so 50 Shades really irked me on the writing quality front. Also I thought the characterization was a little sloppy. But I wasn't looking for a literary masterpiece in 50 Shades. It was sexy. It was...

Take some time away from your project! That always helps with revision. When you're too close to the project, you miss things that you would otherwise see. So put your project away for a while. Work on something new. Start revising an older project with your fresh eyes.